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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦112:Traveling in Our Life

发布时间:2015-02-28 14:11浏览次数:505
要求:
现在,许多人喜欢旅游。假如你也很喜欢旅游,请以“Traveling in Our Life”为题,写一篇短文,说说旅游的好处。
要求:
(1).运用 would like, hope 等提示词;
(2).至少说出旅游的3个好处;

(3).词数:80—100。


Traveling in Our Life
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用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

用户练习作文:

Traveling in our life Traveling now is very popular with everyone. It’s becoming more and more important in our life, and it’s becoming the common activity that most people like to take part in. When we get tired, we would like to have a holiday to enjoy ourselves. When we are free, we also want to go out to enjoy the beautiful nature with our families. When we are sad, we hope to go to the beautiful mountains to breaths fresh air and relax ourselves. In this way we can have a good time and have a great change in our life. We can take a lot of photos, make many friends and enjoy different kinds of nature pictures. The most important is that traveling is good for our health. Traveling is really a very good activity, isn’t it?

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