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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写。
In my opinion, it is good for us saving money. With the life level improving,people spend more and more money living life but their income is not improved or it is not improved as fast as like the speed of life. However,they eat three meals as same as before, or they need to see a doctoe if they have a fever or other diseases.Therefore, they need to look for other methods to save money in order to lead a better life.Even that the shopkeeper ask the coupon actives,they are very correct to collect the all kinds of coupons or look for group-buy when they eat out or travel.Firstly,even if they do not look for group-buy,they samely need to eat out or travel.Now ,you have chance to use less money to do the same thing,why do not you choose to group-buy. Second, they need to buy somethings or spend moeny doing somethings in the same shop,of course, they want to collect all kinds of coupons and buy the goods they want with less money. In a word,we are looking for to use less money to enjoy life or buy good goods.
