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In my opinion, it is good for us to save money. With the life level improved,we spend more and more money living life but our income is not improved or it is not improved as fast as like the speed of the life level. However,we eat three meals as same as before, or we need to see a doctor if we have a fever or other sickness.Therefore, we need to look for other methods to save money in order to lead a better life.Even that the shopkeeper asks the coupon actives,we are very correct to collect allthel kinds of coupons or look for group-buy when they eat out or travel.Firstly,even if we do not look for group-buy,we samely need to eat out or travel.Now ,we have chance to use less money to do the same thing,why do not we choose to look for group-buy. Second, we need to buy something or spend moeny doing something in the same shop,of course, we want to collect all kinds of coupons and buy the goods we want with less money. In a word,we are looking for to use less money to enjoy life or buy good goods.
