可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
A million pound is a novel written by the famous American writer Mark Twin. The main story of the novel is about the fortuitous adventure of a poor American young man Henry Adans experienced in London. One day, when the young man was wandering in the street, he came across two millionaires who had a bet on what would happen in a month if they gave a million pound bill to a poor man. So they decided to give the bill to Henry to see how it would come to end. Unexpectedly, when it came to the deadline of the bet, Henry was neither dead of starvation nor arrested, but became a millionaire himself and won the love of a beautiful young lady. The language used in the novel is sarcastic and humorous. It reflects the life between the poor and the rich, it's worth reading to learn about the life in that time.