作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Dear John, Thanks for your letter and glad to hear that you will come to China and spend the Mid-autumn Day here. Now I'd like to tell something about the Mid-autumn Day to you. It's a traditional festival with a long history and a unique festival only existing is China. On this day, all family members come together to have dinner, eat moon-cakes, and enjoy the moon. Yours, Lihua