单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Hi My name is Mike I Come form China I am 15 years old I live in a countryside My house is good It has trees and fish air My house has 4 people They live in this house I love they My father is a teacher My mouther is a doctor My brother is a studier He is a good studier He is good at math He math teacher very like he And my family is very good My brother and I never fight