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my hometown is in hubei province. there are many interesting places and delicious food in my home town. the most interesting place i would like to take a foreign friend to is the countryside of hubei. to begin with, the countryside there boasts of beautiful natural scenary thanks to its mild climate. it would be very relaxing for a foreign friend who is tired of bustling city life to feast her eyes on green countryside scenary. besides,the local food is very tasty.