高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；丰富的使用了长难句；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

My hometown is a small place on south,but i like very much,A few years ago,my hometown very beautiful that have the rivers 、trees、houses and streetes.there was many trees around of our town,and the rivers was very clear with some fishes swam in the water.the house simple to builted of the wood,and the streets were very narrow,people were work very hard. Nowadays there is many high building in our hometome andt kinds of the car can see everywhere on the streetes.but the environment more and more bad for the industral development .so the trees and fish less more and more. the pollution is urgency now.