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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Hello!My name is hubin. Iam a business.I have known your corporation new project which called 5670 in a celebration ,was held in NewYork.I am very instresting about this project. And I hope you can sent me a price list and instrustion. Thanks for your cooperation. Hope we can astablish business relationship.
