2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle.There are basically two ways to go to school.Both can able to bring easier for our of getting around.the first of all,by bus can saving your time,and whenever,at the hot weather or cold both are great.Sometimes,you feeling tried who makes you saving your physical strength.By bicycle also good to going to school,i like this style,because it help me become to strong,that a good sports.