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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达过于贫乏，高级词汇进步空间很大，拼写错误稍多；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Receiver:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Sender:hubin@163.com Dear Sir, I am Hubin. I 'm very interested in your company's product, product number is 5670. Would you kindly send me a price list and instruction. I'll very appreciate your coopreation. I hope we'll establish business relationship in future. I'll very appreciate your coopreation. I hope we'll establish business relationship in future. Yours: Hubin
