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Nowadays, many people have a great variety of healthy problems due to the stresses of life or work. more than 60% peope don't pay attention to the health. They often eat too much junk food at home or office without moving body. At the same time ,lacking practices also cause too many problems in health. As to me , I believe that it is necessary to take exercises for keeping our body healthy.For example,you can also do some sports like playing basketball,football,and the like. There is another way to keep our healthy.that is ,traditional Chinese Medisine,such as medical massage,acupuncture anesthesia,Chinese cupping therapy,and skin scraping therapy with water and so on. people can use these methods to make targeted therapy. At last ,we shoud always be happy when facing some troubling issues. As long as we always keep a good habit and mood,we will be healthy for a long time.
