文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
As we know, English has already become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students find it hard to master it. Let me show how. Firstly, make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Secondly, it is an effective way to read the text aloud in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Finally,You should know that study English is very important.So that we can talk with them when we meet the people who comes from The USA.