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字数：300 满分：100分
行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. Well,in my opinion , I support the view that saving money is a good habit . there are some facters contributing to this idea. Firstly ,As we know,saving is a traditional virtues. We like to say saving water.saving money or structuring conservation-minded society.It can thus be seen saving is a modern tradency .Secondly,For security ,It is necessary to save some money in case of need.Thirdly, Saving money in a way is making money . In short,Saving money is a good hobit ,everyone should from the good hobit.
