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字数：300 满分：100分
句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
How to save our money As a student, know how to use our money is a good way to reduce our parents' stress. Therefore, we should learn how can we to save our money and make the best use of them,which can help us enjoy a sufficient life. In daily life, if we eat less junk food instead of main food then we can save a large sumes of money. In addition, much money means that we can do what we always want to do,such as travelling ,shopping or buy some books which written bu famous people and so on. What'more, we can reduce our parents' stress, it is another way to care our parents. It is also helpful your future life. You can manage to you family. In a short,be a saved man,you will live a high quality life.
