文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;注意文中个别的句子错误;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
with title ''better city,better life'', aims to show civilizations of city, exchange experiments of city develop ,explore new ways of living environment, style and work condiction, and learn to make ecologic society ,insist sustainable development. it will absorb almost 200 countries ,world organanisms and 700 milinent visitors to attend. i think it will be great expo ,because it is imporntent to expore new ideas to let city or life to be better with developments of all parts of our cities.