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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;复杂句采用很棒。

用户练习作文:

living in today‘s world, we share almost all thoughts by electrical devices,like phone, computer and so on, and by them, we connect with each other. it is convenient and helpful, but, as time by, we find we have less effective connect with other people face by face, thereof, we all through less important communication by heart, that is awful and unsustainable. we become solo, lacking of affection exchange. so , we should think about the ways we living, what problems it has, and how to do better.in the end, we will find it so important to communication with each other ,especially by meeting people face by face.so ,let's do it.don't forget to say hello to people, even a stranger,don't hesitate to turn to your wife or husband , friends and parents when you have some felling need to share.

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