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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3095
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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用户的作文(系统评分25.5分
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文章层次较为清晰;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;请作者注意积累词汇量,以及注意单词拼写的检查。

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Is it wise to make friends online? with the development of internet,more and more people can use net practically and our life also become more convinent in modern times. Make friends onine is a common phenomenon. However, there is a threaten for us also.For example,some crimers use net to do sonethingbad.

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