小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

i have a friend,her name is Avery,infact she is my danugter.she has a pair of black eyes and black hair.she only 77 days now and i love her so much.she is Chinese but was born in America.i wish her grow up fast and been a best friend with me !