2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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At present only a few middle school students like reading after class.Of course there are some reasons.First,they have too much homework to do.They spend a lot of time doing their homework.Second,many of them take most of their free time to play computer games or surf on internet.Third,they maybe don't have a habit of reading.In fact,there are many advantages of reading after class.As we know,books are bridges to knowledge.You can get more knowledge about the world from books.You can learn how to think,how to make yourself better.Reading will let your life become more and more colourful.So I give my friends an advice.Just stay away from computer games,take up your books,you will find everything is in the book and it is valueable.