小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

i live in a very old town which is sorroundes by baeutiful woods.i was always memoris something in was child .we were catch fish in the river which is near my parent house.when fall caming my frinds with me to climate the small hill and pick friut up from the terr.