小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

I live in a very old town which is sorroundes by baeutiful woods.i was always memoris something in was child .We were catch fish in the river which is near my parents house.when fall caming my frinds with me to climate the small hill and pick apples up from the tree.