小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；丰富的使用了长难句；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查。

I live in a very old town which is sorroundes by baeutiful woods.i was always memory something in was the child .We were catch fish in the river which is near my parents house.when fall coming my frinds with me to climate the small hill and pick apples from the tree.