小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods.I was always memory something in was the child.We were catch fish in the river which is near my parents house.when summer time coming and my friends with me to climate the small hill and picking apples from the tree.