2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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YunNan is a good place to travel. It has various culture,nations and dilicious food.When you are arrive at here,you will find it is very beautiful.Because the weather is warm,and is suitable for live.Especialy,Lijiang of YunNan,it is hourned the place of the closest heaven.When you see it,you will feel very peace.At present,those cities is very noisy,our exist environment is very bad,we need a place to makes us relaxed.I believe that he must be like there. On the other hand,YunNan is one of a representative to national cultural in China. For us,we should introduce good place and colourful culture to foreign friends in our country.YunNan is a good place!