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At present only a few middle school students like reading after class.Of course there are some reasons.First,they have too much homework to do.They spend a lot of time doing their homework.Second,many of them take most of their free time to play computer games or surf on the internet.Third,some people maybe don't form a habit of reading. In fact,there are many benefits of reading.As we know,books are bridges to knowledge.You can get more knowledge about the world from books.You can learn how to think better,how to make yourself better.Reading will let your life become more and more colourful. At last,here are some my advice.teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework.So we can have more time to read.On the other hand,students please stay away from computer games and open up your books.You will find everything is in the book and it is valuable.