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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；高级词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。
On behalf of our student union,I would like to extend my enthusiastic welcome to you.It is a delight that we will spend a little time together on learning. Here are some tips that you should know may put you to great convenience.The very first suggestion is,unlike in your hometown,you may try to adapt to the wordless student.They will not talk much unless you are familiar enough.Whereas,I would like to tell you the fact that anyone with a curiosity and desire about food will find this place is like a paradise.by the side of our campus are considerable kinds of restaurants,perfectly able to meet whatever your taste is.The last but not the lest,some historical sites like the Great Wall in Beijing are recommendable because of their splendid and gorgeous look.It is advisable to hang around in the city. I am sure that you will take my advice into account.Please immediately contact me if there is any confusion.Hope that you will have a brilliant experience.
