2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，不过文中词汇表达贫乏；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

As far as we know, the computer was invented to now a few decades, a wide range of make use of at the workplace.The use of computers, fast computation and convenient operation, also penetrated into people's daily life.Then, people became aware of the side effects of excessive use of the computer.