小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。

everyone wants to have lunch in the garden but it's nice and warm .short shirts are in fashion now ,would like to try it.that to too expensive to us,we can't afforf all that money.that's the most expensive model in the shop,it costs five hundred dollors.i want a dress like that one,but it must be my size