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Everyone wants to have lunch in the garden,It's nice and warm .Short shirts are in fashion now ,Would like to try it.That to too expensive to us,We can't afford all that money.That's the most expensive model in the shop,It costs five hundred dallors.I want a dress like that one,but it must be my size.