小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章层次较为清晰。

Everyone wants to have lunch in the garden，It's nice and warm .Short shirts are in fashion now ,would like to try it.That to too expensive to us,we can't afford all that money.That's the most expensive model in the shop,It costs five hundred pounds.I want a dress like that one,but it must be my size.