如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;作者词汇量较小,单词拼写也要注意。
As we all know,the conclusion which was saw and heared by ourselves directly was not accute.It's obvious that you may say the answer right away when you see the question.However,it's not wise that you do it. As a person,you must learn how to think and relfect.Something may not very easy.It's difficult for us to be concentrate on our practice.You're easy to be cheated by the phenemon.
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