高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown is in small town where surrounding big forest,and river running through the town.cleen water in the river,peoples can fishing here.but it was imaged for ten years ago.But now rapidly developing in the town,anything have been changed.Especially air pullution seriously ,and also traffact jam every morning and everning.Local gorverment must settle the problem to give people better future