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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9054
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇量积累较好,但高级词汇的积累仍需加强,还要避免有拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

From the picture given above,a student is questioning his teather that whether or not he ought to get education once he learn how to use Google.The picture vividly portray a widespread phenomenon that the internet has more and more impacts on learning,and people have a doubt that whether or not thay should attend classes.I,however,strongly oppose this standpoint. From my perspective,what i want to emphasize is that getting education is not simply equal to obtain imformation.First and foremost,we attend school not only for getting imformation,but also for more fabulous qualities.Our teacher may teach us how to be a person with great responsibility and kindness.Seacondly,at school we can enroll ourself in many collective activities,from which we can obtain friendship and capability.Last but not least,at school we can socielize with more people, and talk to our teachers and classmtes face to face,which can not be realized on the internet. In summary,internet just a tool,which was used to obtain imformation,it however never can replace conventional classes.

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