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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9040
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;可适当增加从句的使用;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富。

用户练习作文:

From the picture given above,a student is questioning his teacher that whether or not he ought to get education once he learned how to use Google.The picture vividly illustrates a widespread phenomenon that the Internet has more and more impacts on learning,and people have a doubt that whether or not they should attend classes.I,however,strongly oppose this opinion. From my perspective,what I want to emphasize is that getting education is not simply equal to obtain information.First and foremost,we attend school not only for getting information,but also for more fabulous qualities.Our teacher may teach us how to be a person with great responsibility and kindness.Seacondly,at the school we can enroll ourselves in many collective activities,from which we can achieve friendship and capability.Last but not least,at school we can socialize with more people, and talk to our teachers and classmates face to face,which can not be realized on the Internet. In summary,Internet just a tool,which was used to obtain information,it,however, cannot replace conventional classes.

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