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I love my hometown.My hometown is in a small town where surrounding a thick forest.The river,running through the town from eastern to western,had clean water in which children can be swimming in the river ,also adults can be fishing here.But it was imaged for the ten years ago.Now great change have taken place here.A lot of factories were setup,and air pollution seriously,also traffic jam every morning and evening.Local goverment must settle the problem to give people better future.