小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend name is skeke,she was twelve years old,She is shorter than me, but she is fatter than me,she likes singing,don't like dance,Because she very fat,but she singing very good,she have a long hair,small mouth，there are 5 people in their family, grandparents, parents and her, right, and has been a lovely dog