小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend name is skeke, she was twelve years old, She is shorter than me, but she is fatter than me, she likes singing, don't like dance, Because she very fat, but she singing very good, she have a long hair, small mouth, there are 5 person in their family, grandparents, parents and her, right, and has been a lovely dog