采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量。
Dudu is nine years old, every day bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark bark auf called, but he is very cute, he is a member of our family,i like it very much. We all like it.