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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章词汇使用多样性不足，且单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅。
From: hubin@163.com Date: 2015.Dec.18th Subjuct: To establish business relationship To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear Sir or Madamn, I knowed you have a news product the number is 5670 during the Dec.12th and 15th on the exhibition in NewYork and I very interested in it. Would you kindly send me a price list and the instruction? I will appreciate your coopreation and deeply hope we could establish business relationship. Your sineserely, Hubin
