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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足。

用户练习作文:

Most of us may judge a person at the first sight by their appearance. If one is handsome or beautiful, we are more likely to get closer to him. However, it is unwise because what values most is inner virtue not the outer appearance. There are quantities of famous stars who have great talents without attractive appearances.For instance, Mother Susan, fat and not so beautiful, but with her great talents in music and her persistence, finally stood on the stage of music and made her voice heard throughout the world. It is obvious that she is successful and nice though she doesn't own a nice look. It is commonly known that those mushrooms with colorful appearance may be poisonous. People who are attracted by their attractive appearance will possibly be sent to death. Therefore, we should value virtues more than appearance, for virtues are permanent but appearance is present.

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