2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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dear Tom, Do you konw my hometown? It's Sichuan. Do you konw the most interestingplace I like? It's Ruoergai County, a great highland. It is so agreeable that when a cute girl who has hated the dirt and noisy big city comes a clean and flesh place. when I came into Ruoergai County ,I start konwing that three is so bule sky ,so white and soft clouds and so flesh air. Herds of cattle and sheep rambled in the green ocean.Herds is on the houses.All is so sweet and quiet. I ensure that you will love the place like me.Do you? Yours, Slyvia.