英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:08浏览次数:1904
要求:
欢迎辞,欢迎加入俱乐部。
标题:Welcome to our club
本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞,属于一篇应用文写作,与04年6月的导游词类似,笔者认为难度不大,可按照以下提纲书写:   
1.表达你的欢迎;    
2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。
用户的作文(系统评分52.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Welcome to our club! The club's name is the Hao Hao Piano club. Do you know our club? Last month, we had a Piano party. Our club have 13 programs about Piano. We interviewed a lot of people after this party. They said that the party is very good and hope that we will do that usually. If you want to play the Piano, you can enter our club. You don't spend any money, because it is free. But you can't play the Piano, you enter our club too, because we will teach you. I believe that you enter our club and must play Piano after three months. If you join into our club, we will be very excited. If you join into our club, you will do what you never did before. If you join into our club, you will be every excited. So, I hope you enter our club as soon as possible.

会员评论0个评论)
garyko
金币:155

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:80.5zy1504155327

人气:41发布:2013-11-25

得分:80.0Zizi思

人气:99发布:2013-05-24

得分:79.0山有扶苏

人气:93发布:2013-05-26

得分:73.0corl3011

人气:108发布:2013-11-16

得分:71.5yutao2011

人气:112发布:2013-08-13