2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Dear Tom, Do you know where my hometown is? It's Sichuan. Do you know the most interestingplace I like? It's Ruoergai County, a great highland. It is so agreeable that when a cute girl who has hated the dirt and noisy city comes to a clean and flesh place. When I came into Ruoergai County,I start knowing that three is so bule sky ,so white and soft clouds and so flesh air. Herds of cattle and sheep rambled in the green ocean.Herds were on the houses.All is so sweet and quiet. I ensure that you will love it like me.Do you? Yours, Slyvia.