2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Dear Tom, Do you know where my hometown is? It's Sichuan. Do you know the most interesting place I like? It's Ruoergai County, a great highland. It is so agreeable that when a cute girl who has hated the dirt and noisy city comes to a clean and flesh place. When I came into Ruoergai County,I start knowing that three is so blue sky,so white and soft clouds and so flesh air. Herds of cattle and sheep rambled in the green ocean.Herds were on the houses.All is so sweet and quiet. I ensure that you will love it like me.Do you? Yours, Slyvia.