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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
what life will be happy？in term of me,it should have healthy body, good relationship, happy job, and great living environment.but, what if you are an smoker or you have some friends/ family are smoker? i think you will have some problem on you living environment , health of body and relationship, thereof, you will likely far away from having a happy life. on study of tobacco consumption, it is easy to find the tendency of its consumption will go up, it means you will have more and more chance to live in bad air, have awful health and mood, you will unlikely have a sustainable ,happy life. so,here is a advice to you, quit smoking or convince your friends/family to quit smoking, it is good to you and your people!
