假如你是Tom, 你的美国笔友David向你写信诉说他没有朋友的苦恼。请你给他写一封回信,告诉他如何交朋友。内容可包括
以下要点:
1. 保持自信,待人礼貌;3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇。
I have had some advice for your suitcase where you have no friends. There are as follows. First, if you intend to appeal to others, you need to keep not only confident but also polite to others. Secondly, you should have your own advantages and keep it. Thirdly, communicating with your friends oftenly can strengthen your friendship as well. In addition , as the saying goes " A friend in need is a friend indeed. " when your friend is in danger, you should try your best to help your friends out.