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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Saving money is a good traditional from old days to now. Lots of studemts are careful with their money and save their money all the time, even collect many coupons to buy something or eat something just for cheap. But I don't support this behavior, I have my own idea about it. In my opinion,although saving money is good ,but in a way, it cause some problems. For example, some students can't enjoy the feeling about buying. They just buy the cheapest thing instead of the one they like. On the other hand ,money is not the most important,we should take good use of money ,it can help us to know more about the world.And many students can make money by getting a part -time job .Saving money all the time can't make us enjoy our life better. In a word, life is short and money is always be there. No matter you are poor or rich , the most important thing is to take good use of your money, you will experience something different.
