雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中高级词汇比较灵活，总体词汇表达贫乏，文中拼写错误稍多。

With the development of the transportation in contempoary soceity, more and more people are willing to travel abroad. Generally, it would bring lots of positive effect to the society. To the first, more and more people can be given an opportunity to get to know the outside world and learn more about other countries cultures. Second, for the conutries where people travel, the increase of economy can benefit from the large amount of travelers.