高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

My hometown In my childood merory , my hometown was very beautiful. There were many gree trees round our country.And the river was very clean and many fish played in it .Thoughthe house were small and tiny ,the people were very poor .But we played very happy .the stree were not wide like now .